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10月11日雅思写作大作文分析及范例

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今天老师为雅思考生们带来10月11日雅思写作大作文分析及范例,希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助。More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore, people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

今天老师为雅思考生们带来10月11日雅思写作大作文分析及范例,希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助。
More people are using mobile (cell) phones and computers to communicate. Therefore, people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2014.10.11)
解析:
本题争议
-手机和电脑的使用会使人们丧失面对面交流的能力
不同意
-手机和电脑给人们提供先进的沟通方式,和面对面交流类似
-手机和电脑给人们带来大量的新信息,促进面对面沟通
同意
-过度使用会导致沉溺在虚拟世界,造成交流障碍
雅思写作范例:
In consideration of the fact that the convenience of communicating via mobiles and computers has overshadowed the traditional way of communication, some people argue that people are being deprived of the ability to communicate face to face. Personally, I am not in favor of this view.
First of all, advanced means of communication realized through mobiles and communication have largely facilitated the exchanges of ideas among people. For example, communication tools such as video-chatting enable people to interact with each other anywhere and anytime possible. As a result, people could frequently experience the interchange of information that shows great resemblance to meeting each other, which obviously would contribute to the enhancement of ability to communicate with others face to face.
Another significant reason is that the popularization of the Internet provides people with the access to large amounts of information through cellphones and computers. Consequently, people could obtain various kinds of information which has always been an essential part of daily conversations. Conversely, if people were not exposed to mobiles and computers, they would not gain up-to-date news and thus lose the opportunity to share the latest information with others, which would lead to increased barriers and degraded skills of communication.
However, it has to be admitted that mobiles and computers may also give rise to communicative disorders. In fact, excessive use of them in a long term would indulge people in the virtual world. What’s worse, it is probable that they would be discouraged from meeting people and not be adapted to communicating with others face to face. only in this case would mobiles and computers weaken the ability of communication among people.
To conclude, despite the negative effects of cellphones and computers, I still hold the opinion that face-to-face communicative ability has been improved rather than impeded because of the effective communication tools and diversified types of information made possible by mobiles and computers.
以上就是名师为考生们带来的10月11日写作大作文分析及反例,希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助。
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